William L. Reese
State University of New York at Albany
I. The point-for-point exchange with Gellman has not been without
interest, and I am grateful for it. [Editors' note: The discussion referred to by
Professor Reese began with Professor Gellman's review of Reese's Dictionary of
Philosophy and Religion in the Fall 1997 edition of this Newsletter, and
continued in the Fall 1998 and Spring 1999 issues.]
After reading Gellman's initial review, my editorial assistant
concluded that it was the most constructive review the Dictionary has received
because it contained the greatest number of suggestions for improvement. I must admit that
it took me some time to come to embrace that perspective. Gellman's new response covers
the same ground as his initial review, and should I once more answer point for point, my
reply would repeat much of my original response. That might be tedious. Gellman's reply
seems to presume that no change had been indicated in my position; but the end of my
response summarized many points where I granted that clarification and emendation were in
order. The majority of these improvements were introduced into the new (third) printing of
the second edition, issued in January from the Dictionary's new home (Amherst:
Humanity Books [Prometheus]).
Several others have been reserved for the fourth printing due to
space restrictions. These include Gettier, Hillel, ontological argument, and Plantinga. In
one printing or the other, most of the issues central to the new reply will have received
serious consideration. Many of the remaining differences between us seem to me differences
of interpretation. I remain convinced, for example, that Gellman's interpretation of
Clifford is much more flexible than the position stated in the "Ethics of
Belief," and that the Judaica issues are overstressed. In my view, then, the next
step on the exchange is with the gods, both editorial and otherwise. In any event, that
concerns the future. My present purpose is to consider the use of the Dictionary
in teaching. In particular, I wish to describe the use of the Dictionary in Phil.
110E, an intensive writing course in philosophy at SUNY-Albany.
II. The Use of the Dictionary of Philosophy and Religion:
Eastern and Western Thought in Phil. 110E, an Intensive Writing Introduction to
Philosophy.
This is a course with an enrollment limited to 25 students,
requiring nine papers, allowing something less than two weeks per paper. With nine papers
to be written, it is a four-credit course. With 225 papers to be read, the course is
granted a TA. The first paper comes in singly. Its rewrite, should the student opt for one
(allowed on the first paper alone), comes in with the second and third papers, six weeks
into the semester; the second set of three papers at twelve weeks; the third set at
semester's end. Each semester, at least one student suggests on the student evaluations
that all of the papers come in singly. Given the great number of papers involved, that has
not seemed practical. I read one-third of the papers each submission, or three papers by
each student during the semester.
The course is designed:
(1) to increase writing skills, especially in developing
problem-solving papers. The problems treated are all, as one would expect, philosophical
problems. In the course of the semester, nine such problems are treated.
(2) to expand the student's knowledge of the history, major
figures, and concepts of philosophy. The Dictionary plays a major role in this
aspect of the course.
(3) to engage the student in working out his or her own position
on the nine problems, i.e., to engage the student in a program of increasing
self-knowledge. To this end we take Socrates as our mentor; and the basic texts of the
course, along with the Dictionary, are The Trial and Death of Socrates: Four
Dialogues (Dover, thrift edition), and the Hackett edition of Plato's Republic
(every book of which is treated in one problem or another).
We aim at the three objectives through a mix of "information
bursts" (videos or other activities designed to move the student at once into the
heart of the problem); reading assignments; full class discussions; small group
discussions; background lectures, calling attention to and expanding upon, relevant
alternatives treated in the Dictionary; and at the end of each cycle, on
Presentation Day, having the students present their papers to the class, or a subgroup of
the class, and defend them. In these activities the students exercise their capacities to
read, write, think, talk, and listen-the five skills necessary in becoming an educated
person.
III. The nine problems of the course are:
(1) The Significance of Socrates' Life and Teachings
(2) The Nature and Extent of One's Personal Freedom
(3) One's Value Profile and Its Underlying Theory
(4) The Nature of the Self
(5) One's Relation to Truth, and One's Theory of Truth
(6) One's View of the Nature and Function of Beauty
(7) One's Way of Distinguishing between Right and Wrong, and Its
Underlying Theory
(8) The Principles Making up One's Social Philosophy, and Their
Defense
(9) God and Immortality-Both Affirmation and Denial Producing a
Contrast in How One Relates to the Universe
As elsewhere, the university has its own Web site. Phil. 110E has
its own page on the Web site. The Dictionary and the Web page interrelate in
supporting the teaching of the course. In the next two sections we ask how this occurs.
IV. Dictionary Sources
How do the resources of the Dictionary support work on
the nine problems? Each of the problems can be researched by reference to extensive
relevant material in the Dictionary, much of it gathered into the single entry
named by the problem. Each numbered paragraph of the entry leads to cross-references
radiating throughout the volume. The breakdown of the dictionary materials regarding each
of the nine problems in turn is as follows:
Q1. Socrates: Socrates, Plato, and Aristotle
entries; Greek Philosophy; Philosophy (q.v. D31) (This is to be read: "See point 31
in the Philosophy entry of the Dictionary." This convention will be followed
consistently.); Sophists.
Q2. Freedom: The entire Freedom entry. Thirty-one
entry listings on philosophers who have held each of the four definitions of freedom with
references ( q.v.'s) to their own entries in the Dictionary, and the relevant
numbered paragraphs of those entries. Such entry listings provide a summary of the
important ideas in the Dictionary on the given topic (four definitions); Free
Will (five entry listings); Determinism (sixteen entry listings).
Q3. Value: Value (eight entry listings); Final
Value (eighteen entry listings); Value Theory (eleven entry listings).
Q4. Self: Self (ten entry listings); Person
(fifteen entry listings); Soul (seventeen entry listings).
Q5. Truth: Truth (thirty-eight entry listings,
five definitions); Epistemology (ten entry listings); Knowledge (sixteen entry listings);
Skepticism (thirty entry listings); Wisdom (seventeen entry listings).
Q6. Beauty: Aesthetics (thirty-seven entry
listings); Art (eight entry listings); Poetry (three q.v. references).
Q7. Right and Wrong: Right (six entry listings);
Good (twelve entry listings); Ethics (forty-four entry listings); Evil (sixteen entry
listings); Utilitarianism (thirteen entry listings); Axiology (four entry listings).
Q8. Social Philosophy: Social Contract Theory
(fourteen entry listings); Natural Rights (six entry listings); Natural Law (twelve entry
listings); Sovereignty (six entry listings); and entry listings for Hobbes, Locke, Marx,
Plato, Rousseau, Jefferson, T. Paine, Rawls, and Nozick.
Q9. God and Immortality: God (seventy-five entry
listings, divided among nature of God, arguments for God, and God as a projection of human
awareness); Religion (twenty-seven entry listings, plus entries on basic faiths of the
world); Immortality (eleven entry listings); Reincarnation, and Metempsychosis (numerous
q.v. references); Faith (sixteen entry listings); Myth (fifteen entry listings); Reason
(fifteen entry listings).
V. Web Page
How does the Phil. 110E Web page support work on the nine
problems? The course Web page, which can be called up either through the student's
internet connection or through any on-campus computer, contains four kinds of resources
supporting the course:
(1) All of the Dictionary entries listed above are on the
Web at the site of the treatment of each problem. This material can be called up on the
bottom half of the screen, and scrolled through, as the student works on his/her problem.
(The further cross-references must be looked up in the Dictionary.) Use of the
material on the Web page is an inducement to follow out cross-references in the Dictionary
.
(2) The Web page also contains generic forms for contrasting
logical approaches to the nine problems. We call these forms Elementary Argument,
Problematic Method, Logistic, Critical Analysis, and Dialogic Method. Each form can be
called up on an individual computer, and worked through step by step from initial question
to conclusion. These generic forms are explored in relation to the first paper, on
Socrates. Experimentation is in order, since one or another form may work better depending
on circumstances.
(3) A sample outline is also present on each problem, stored at
the site of that problem. This is the outline we work through in class. We encourage the
students to experiment with different approaches, while also insisting that their outlines
be comparable to, and contain the basic features of, the sample outline. Most students
naturally use the sample outline which has been worked through in class. These outlines
usually combine Problematic and Logistic methods (cf. the summary Freedom outline at VIII
below). For the former method q.v. Dewey (D2) (to be read, "In Dictionary
refer to Dewey [2]"; convention used throughout); for the latter, q.v. Descartes
(D10). These outlines can also be called up on the computer screen, and worked through in
connection with the stored Dictionary material.
(4) Finally, the Phil 110E Web page contains what we call a
Grammatology. The submitted student papers are read for grammar as well as logic. The
presence of the Grammatology allows us to say of grammatical mistakes, "Cf.
Grammatology (1), (2)," or whatever. Examples of areas covered: number shifts, and
failure to use the subjunctive. In the Grammatology, instances are given of these mistakes
and how to avoid them.
To accomplish the work, class periods must cycle from Information
Burst to Presentation Day nine times. Although we consider six class periods the normal
cycle, the shortness of our university semester requires some curtailment and overlapping
of assignments, e.g., some work during vacations, and submission of papers in sets. For
purposes of illustration, however, we shall use the six-period cycle in discussing the
first problem, on Socrates.
VI. The significance of Socrates' life and teachings. The six
periods are used in the following manner:
(1 and 2) First two periods. Information burst: Maxwell Anderson,
"Barefoot in Athens," a 90-minute film dealing with the last days of Socrates.
Experience has taught us that students tend to zone out during video presentations. For
that reason any video we use is accompanied by a handout, suggesting what the students
should be looking for, and containing questions to answer as they listen. With this
preparation, they have something to say in the post-video discussion. In the case of the
Socrates film, the handout contains other details, the spelling of relevant names
("Peloponnesian," "Xanthippe"), since they will be using them in their
papers, and the charges brought against Socrates. We also ask them to try to decide the
basic question whose answer, in their view, will illuminate these events. In the second
half of the second period we begin the discussion of these questions, and their relation
to the life and thought of Socrates. By then they will have begun to read the Four
Dialogues, and have two somewhat different accounts of Socrates to reconcile. We also ask
them to prepare for the third period a diagrammatic scheme of their question, its answer,
and reasons supporting the answer, following the generic outline of Elementary Argument:
Question
Answer
/ | \
R1 R2 R3
(3) Third period. The period begins with small group discussions
of this material, with the instructor and TA rotating among the groups. It becomes clear
that Elementary Argument is inadequate for many of the questions they are considering. One
reason is that many questions have another side. Was the court justified in convicting
Socrates? There are two sides, "yes" and "no," while Elementary
Argument treats just one side. To handle what they wish to do, they must consider two
answers to the question, and two clusters of reasons. So we double the triangle under the
above question, and add two further steps: one in which the strengths of the two clusters
of reasons are evaluated, and a second in which the conclusion is stated. The argument now
contains five steps instead of three, and Elementary Argument has turned into Problematic
Method.
Question
Answer 1 Answer 2
/ | \
/ | \
R1 R2 R3 R1 R2 R3
Evaluation Evaluation
Conclusion
We also explore the other forms when someone has an approach which
seems to demand them. The students are now assigned the task of putting their outlines
into the form their question and perspective require.
(4) Fourth period. On the fourth day material from the early
Dialogues, especially the Apology, and the Dictionary, is added to the mix. Since
Day six is Presentation Day, when the first papers are presented and defended (they are
also allowed to work from their outlines), volunteer group leaders must be chosen. In a
class of twenty-five, at least four leaders are needed. The leaders are to work out the
order of presentation, see that everyone contributes to the discussion, see that the
important points of the papers are considered, and that each presenter gets a fair share
of the time. Initially facing a shortage of volunteers for discussion leaders, we offered
a third of a grade point bonus to be added to the leader's paper, once graded, and a
forest of hands went up. The leaders are chosen at the end of the fourth period.
(5) Fifth period. To prove their merit, the leaders give their
papers before the whole class during this period, and defend them. The instructor or TA
serves as moderator, providing an example of what we wish to take place in the smaller
groups. This gives us an opportunity to emphasize the discussion rule that everyone is to
take part in the discussion, and that learning how to ask questions is as important as
learning how to answer them. More importantly, this session provides class members a final
opportunity for discussing the problem, and thus getting it clearer, prior to their own
turns at presentation.
(6) Sixth period. Presentation Day. As long as I have been using
this approach, on the floor of whatever building of the campus, there have been extra
rooms on the floor during presentation days. I don't have an explanation of this, but am
glad for it. The class is divided into its component groups. The leaders take them to the
adjoining rooms and begin the sessions. The TA and instructor are free to circulate among
the groups. As at the APA, there are some papers, and some presenters, one especially
wishes to hear.
VII. Generalizing on the cycle.
(1) For different problems we have various Information Bursts.
(a.) For the Value problem, it is a set of value cards printed out from the value site of
the Web page. There the students find a list of value terms which past classes have agreed
upon as a fair representation of their values. The students print these out, picking a
large type, then separating them to produce a deck of value cards. The first step of the
value problem is to augment, rank, discuss, and assess these values, eventually producing
their own value profiles; alternately, M. Adler's videos on happiness (Aristotle) and
peace of mind (Epictetus and Aurelius) with handouts. (b.) For the Beauty paper, a video
(course generated with a small grant) containing putative instances of beauty from the
fine arts, nature, sports, and ordinary life. The handout asks for their evaluation of
these instances. (c.) For the problem of Right and Wrong, a set of ethics cards (eleven
ethical cases) for group discussion; alternately, a video of Sandmell's student Harvard
class on Ethics in fervent large-class discussion. (d.) Sets of concept cards for Social
Philosophy, and God and Immortality (concept on face, identification of philosopher and Dictionary
entry on back); alternately, for God and Immortality, program six of Stephen Hawking's
Universe set of videos.
(2) The class philosophizes; ergo, its members are philosophers.
The figures in the Dictionary are "other philosophers." We hope to show
them that the other philosophers have interesting suggestions on the nine problems, some
of which merit their consideration. They will cite classmates in their papers as freely as
they cite the other philosophers. We consider the Dictionary a reservoir of
source material. The only pressure we put on the students to read it is by way of the
final question on each sample outline: "To which philosophers is your position most
similar; to which most dissimilar?" (cf. VIII, below). When the instructor conducts
his lecture/discussion on a given problem, his concern is how the student might proceed.
Reference to IX (2-3) below exemplifies the manner in which material on philosophers with
contrasting positions will be drawn from the Dictionary entries and elaborated,
often switching during the course of the discussion to other figures and concepts more
responsive to the interests of the student. In any case, the outlines have an open
texture. There is no officially approved outcome. The outlines are sets of variables which
become propositional only through student decision. The final papers are to be the
embodiment of the student's thought, assisted by Web page, instructor, and Dictionary
.
(3) In order to avoid the meaningless padding of papers to reach a
prescribed length, our answer to the question of length is that of Abraham Lincoln's story
of someone asking how long a man's legs should be. The answer was: "Long enough to
reach the ground." We aren't concerned with a paper's length, but with having each
step done clearly and convincingly from initial question to final answer. In fact, the
initial papers average around three typed pages; by semester's end, they've doubled in
length.
(4) There is some degree of comfort in having a specified playing
field, the Dictionary serving as a miniature library for the students who search
through it to find what they need in developing their papers. Utilizing its epitomized
knowledge, they practice logical thinking and mini-research. Having a common outline and
common sources, we are virtually free from the submitted paper without credentials, and
the subtle plagiarism of unacknowledged paraphrase.
VIII. Summary Outline of Freedom Problem
Following is the sample outline on the Web page of the second
problem. There are comparable outlines for the other eight problems. As the course goes
on, they adapt the outlines more freely to their needs.
(1) Question: What freedom have I to control my life?
(2) Definitions of freedom
(a) The capacity in a moment of decision
to take any one of two or more alternatives
(b) Doing what one wants to do
(c) Acting in terms of internal, rather
than external, factors
(d) Doing what one ought to do
(3) Discussion of the definitions, concluding with a workable
definition.
(4) In terms of this workable definition, what freedom have I to
control my life?
(5) There are three possible solutions
(a) A great deal of freedom
(b) A limited amount of freedom
(c) No freedom at all
(6) Evaluation of the three possibilities, giving my reasons for
choosing one of them
(7) To which philosophers is my position most similar; to which
most dissimilar?
IX. Comments on the Summary Outline
(1) The above problem uses two cycles of the problematic method,
steps 1-3 moving through four possible definitions to a workable definition; steps 4-6
posing the question anew but in terms of the workable definition; this time the
alternatives concern degrees of freedom.
(2) To provide some content concerning the lecture/discussion for
this problem, we shall briefly indicate how step 2, Definitions of Freedom, would be
handled. (a) For the first definition, while calling attention to the many philosophers
who hold the definition (q.v. Freedom A), we concentrate on the difficulty to which James
called attention, concerning his choice of a path home, in his lecture on "The
Dilemma of Determinism." We add to this the choice students in the class have just
made in choosing SUNY-Albany over other schools. When a student's criteria for choosing
and circumstances are set down, the alternatives reduce to one; if more than one remains,
the student has no clue why s/he is here rather than elsewhere. That would seem to be
chance, not freedom. In canvassing the students, it becomes clear that they, no more than
James, can show that they could have done otherwise. (b) We then consider the second
definition, selecting Hume for our example, while calling attention to other versions of
the view (q.v. Freedom B). Hume contrasts freedom (he uses the term "liberty")
with constraint, and holds that both are consistent with necessity. In this view, since we
clearly sometimes do what we want to do, even if it is necessitated, we are sometimes
free. (c) For the third definition we take Nietzsche's view in Ecce Homo, which in effect
posits an inner self whose actualization would constitute one's authenticity. It does seem
that we can point to potentialities which, actualized, would constitute an inner-directed
self. (d) For the fourth definition we attend to St. Augustine's view of God as the freest
of beings since God always does what ought to be done (also, Saints Thomas Aquinas and
Anselm). While initially rejected by the class, it turns out that in thinking of the first
definition, their goal in choosing their criteria and sorting through the alternatives was
the best choice for themselves. And if doing what one ought to do is doing what is best
for one, they were really using the fourth definition. This is reminiscent of Dewey (q.v.
D7), defining freedom as the ability to make intelligent choices.
(3) Continuing to the third step, we ask if there are qualities in
several of these definitions which can be combined (many think so); or if the first
definition can be saved by indirect argument (e.g., that morality, truth, and creativity
require the ability to do otherwise)? Some think so. Through these steps they move to a
workable definition for themselves, re-ask the question, and continue to the end of the
outline.
(4) The seventh step introduces a whisper of logistic, since its
presence indicates that the basic question has been subdivided: How free are you, and how
does your view relate to the views of other philosophers?
According to the evaluation forms, half of the students believe
their ability to formulate and write problem-solving papers improved during the semester.
A quarter of them think their improvement was dramatic. I personally feel the figures are
higher than that. The others just don't yet realize it.